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May 13, 2004
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Just let me die,
because it's easier than living,
just let me slip away,
because life is less forgiving.

Don't try to console me,
because I already left you,
don't try to change my mind,
because I warned you, you knew.

Stop the finger pointing,
because you're the reason I tried,
stop throwing around the blame,
because you encouraged my suicide.

Leave me alone,
because you only bring pain,
leave my life,
because it's for my gain.

I'm sick of you pretending,
because I know you coudln't care less,
I'm sick of you hating me,
because you created your own mess.

Forget the apologies,
because they weren't sincere,
forget the excuses,
because they aren't even near,

compensating for the pain you instigated,
compensating for the monster you've created,
compensating for all the lies that've faded,
into the backround, the tears that cascaded,
down my face as I realized,
that you weren't my friend,
you were just trying to use me again.
Okay. I'm now kicked into suicidal gear ;.; I REALLY need to keep writing or else I have no way to vent and I'll... explode xD

Hope you enjoy this one,
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GulfKiller101 Featured By Owner May 8, 2012
im suicidal i want to die, life is shit i despise it
zeldalinkgirllover Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2010
That's just like me... I like this!
impactnow Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2010
I have been here many times. your writing is very good, never give up.
ArienSmith Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
Great poem! Are you still suicidal...?
Deadlysunshine Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2010
this is beautiful and so good, i dont know how to describe it
skinedkneesjuliet Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009
i take comfort in knowing someone else can feel the same way.
XxSora145xX Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009
I love this poem, it really expresses feeling, in a much more realistic way than I usually see.
B-McLoud Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
and I don't really know how to express myself really well..... so..... =/
B-McLoud Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
It's kinda fits in what i'm feeling right now.... -_- and it sucks.....
not your poem of course..... the feeling... -_-
u rock =P
Soul-Of-Sorrow Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2008
This poem really speaks to me because i've recently been feeling that kind of way and well that seems to show a whole new point of view to me, thank you very much for sharing this with us :)

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