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Just let me die,
because it's easier than living,
just let me slip away,
because life is less forgiving.

Don't try to console me,
because I already left you,
don't try to change my mind,
because I warned you, you knew.

Stop the finger pointing,
because you're the reason I tried,
stop throwing around the blame,
because you encouraged my suicide.

Leave me alone,
because you only bring pain,
leave my life,
because it's for my gain.

I'm sick of you pretending,
because I know you coudln't care less,
I'm sick of you hating me,
because you created your own mess.

Forget the apologies,
because they weren't sincere,
forget the excuses,
because they aren't even near,

compensating for the pain you instigated,
compensating for the monster you've created,
compensating for all the lies that've faded,
into the backround, the tears that cascaded,
down my face as I realized,
that you weren't my friend,
you were just trying to use me again.
Okay. I'm now kicked into suicidal gear ;.; I REALLY need to keep writing or else I have no way to vent and I'll... explode xD

Hope you enjoy this one,
<3Missy<3
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GulfKiller101 Featured By Owner May 8, 2012
im suicidal i want to die, life is shit i despise it
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zeldalinkgirllover Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2010
That's just like me... I like this!
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impactnow Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2010
I have been here many times. your writing is very good, never give up.
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ArienSmith Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
Great poem! Are you still suicidal...?
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Deadlysunshine Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2010
this is beautiful and so good, i dont know how to describe it
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skinedkneesjuliet Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009
i take comfort in knowing someone else can feel the same way.
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XxSora145xX Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009
I love this poem, it really expresses feeling, in a much more realistic way than I usually see.
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B-McLoud Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
and I don't really know how to express myself really well..... so..... =/
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B-McLoud Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
It's kinda fits in what i'm feeling right now.... -_- and it sucks.....
not your poem of course..... the feeling... -_-
u rock =P
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Soul-Of-Sorrow Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2008
This poem really speaks to me because i've recently been feeling that kind of way and well that seems to show a whole new point of view to me, thank you very much for sharing this with us :)

:+fav: :+favlove:
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Rhy-wen Featured By Owner May 23, 2008   Writer
Wow... I love this. It's like what I've felt for the last couple of months. This poem's beautiful.
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mysticaldreamzess Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2008  Student Artist
Im feeling that way right now. i want to die. i think that no one would care if i died. it does not matter anyway. no one needs me.
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Suicide77 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2008
Whoa, that's a poem that'll be stamped onto my memory. It's like the happy face that you put on every day with the terrible thought lurking just below. Good poem and amazing way to vent! :thumbsup:
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Angel-Hellion Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2008
Its great.... It shows part of what I feel.... youre really good *favs*
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romanovslover Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2007
Wow! I really like this -favs-
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xcrimsoneyesx Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2007
aww thats beautiful<3
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tandokuno-ookami Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2007  Student
that was so good...it was really an amazing poem that totally spoke the truth...

sometimes you have to think though...wat if there is simply more pain even after death?
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Rimma Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2004
The things people say can cut deeper than a knife. They can kill you before you have a chance at suicide, you know? Damn, I'm inspired to draw. I'll definately be putting up a link to your poem.
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Rimma Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2004
In me comment thingy, or whatever, of course. ^_^;
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BohemianMelody Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2004
OHMIGOD REALLY? I love you :hug: Thanks... and just wondering... where's the link gonna go? xD
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Fainne Featured By Owner May 29, 2004
Wow...shit...I am inspired to draw now....I love it! I have constantly had feelings like that, but I don't want to give people the benifit of knowing I am no longer there. I have also never really been one to take the easy way out of too many things. >;P Don't do anything drastic okay!..yes I know I can't spell everything >D
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BohemianMelody Featured By Owner May 29, 2004
Ohmigod thank you so much <3 And I'm done doing drasatic things... so no worries. Once againm thanks for the favorite and the comment... you rawk meh sawks.
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Fainne Featured By Owner May 31, 2004
Hehe ^^
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BohemianMelody Featured By Owner May 14, 2004
I sure as hell hope so.
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unmendedblacktangled Featured By Owner May 14, 2004   Writer
Look, that's not a friend, a friend is someone who's always there with you, who you don't have to tell when you're sad or angry they just know! Friends, true friends are the ones you never lose and they stay with you! look I know it sorta doesn't help but I love you!

I know with every scar it's another memory of a hurtful word, it'll be okay! I promise it always gets better!
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unmendedblacktangled Featured By Owner May 14, 2004   Writer
WOW, Bohemian this is really good, I've had those feelings before I've even attempted it, and it hurts I know it does! don't worry there ARE people out there and they DO love you!
Love always
Ericka
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BohemianMelody Featured By Owner May 14, 2004
Thankies <3 I'm just going through a lot of shit right now and it seems easier to slip away. This poem's dedicated to some bastard who was like 'Monica, you're fucking ugly and fat. Go kill yourself' and I was like '...' He WAS my friend and I trusted him with everything but now we're in a 'war.' He keeps calling me hurtful names and stuff.. and it just cuts in deeper and deeper every time.
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